Sunday, January 23, 2011

Microfiction Monday: Mothman Redux

Is it a bird? Is it a plane? No, it's the world's best meme, coming to you from Susan at Stony River. One of the highlights of a dangerous writer's week. Enjoy.


"The mist over Uranus is so beautiful," said Borophax the Blue. Mothman wasn't listening. Wings tented overhead, he dreamed of other moons. (140 characters on the nose.)

Knowing Susan's partiality for the afore-mentioned planet, I decided to continue where I left off two weeks ago, with Mothman and the blue-robed wizard. Heck, this may turn into a novel!

Good to be back. I missed last week's MM and missed all of you. Thanks in advance for your comments. I look forward to visiting in return over the next couple of days.

22 comments:

  1. Terrific one as always, Michael! You are so good at these and it's always a pleasure to see what you've come up with! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. I love the "wings tented overhead"! I missed last week too...doesn't this make the week seem to start off better?

    Have a great week!

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  3. Great Michael, love how you are keeping Mothman going. A wonderful week is wished for you.

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  4. Take care with obsessions, you never know where they may lead you.

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  5. Michael;

    I love it too and I love reading books in a series. Maybe Mothman will flutter his wings again sometime?
    Have a nice week Michael.

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  6. I agree with Hope - "wings tented overhead" was my favorite bit, too.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  7. Gotta love Mothman...I too missed last week's mm, but am happy to see you carry the theme forward.
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  8. and the saga continues, I see. Very nicely connected.

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  9. Bwahaha!! Thanks for the laugh! You are hilarious.

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  10. Other Moons indeed! Good one- Thanks!

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  11. tented overhead is brilliant
    and yes...write it!

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  12. Love your ongoing story with this one. :O)

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  13. And I had just forgotten the photo of mothman's best side. Creepers!

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  14. Ooooooooh! Creative! I love this. Really. Do you enjoy sci-fi writing? :D

    ♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

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  15. Oh I'm in love with this one! Sounds like a great start for something for the Mothman anthology too -- I'm working on mine late nights, whenever I can, and hoping it goes somewhere. Thanks for the craft book reviews!

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  16. I love your sci-fi spin on this one Michael! Very unique!

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  17. I'm with Mothman, this find is pretty gloomy.
    ..

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  18. Ah a microfiction epic. Nice one! LOL! :O)

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  19. Thanks for the visit and the follow Mike! That's a beautiful little bit of writing there.

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  20. Nice one! It has a mysterious and romantic overtone, and is quite intriguing. You're right--you probably do have a novel in there!

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