1972. I was in Mrs. Benz's 4th grade class at the Intercommunity School of Zurich. Mrs. Benz was a tough teacher, and we learned a heckuva lot that year. One thing I really wanted to do was write a story that she would think worthy of inclusion in the school magazine, because Mrs. Benz didn't let any old flotsam and jetsam represent her classroom.
I wrote what I thought was a great tale, of three girls wandering into a haunted house. Mrs. Benz got out her editorial pen. I went back and rewrote. This happened a couple more times. Finally, I passed muster. The piece was sent off to the magazine. But now I had to hold my breath. Would it be included?
I remember when the magazine came out. Shiny white paper. Flags of the nations on the front. And there, on page 43, with the unassuming title--"A Story"--was the first published piece by 9 year-old Michael Gilmartin.
40 years on, I still have my copy. I see I was very keen on adjectives. (The final line reads: "They broke into a run and never came back to the old, grimy, smelly, romantic house.") I also used words like picturesque, eiderdown, cobwebby, and luxuriously.
That first sight of my words in print, my byline, meant there was no going back. I don't think I thought I was going to be a writer, any more than I thought I was going to be an astronaut--but I realized I loved to write, and loved the thought of others reading my words. That feeling has never left me, even though my decision to try and make writing a career came almost 20 years later. That dream, born from the first dream, lives on.
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That's so cool that you had a dream to be published in 4th grade and were willing to revise and revise before it was sent out. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteawe, love this! Especially the last sentence of the story that was sent in. too funny! And how great that you had a teacher willing to help. Thanks for sharing your origins!
ReplyDeleteAnother self-directed child. Can you tell I'm somewhat jealous? Anyone who uses words like picturesque and eiderdown at age 9 should be a writer.
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you. I'll be back.
Eiderdown? Is that an English word? Sounds awesome.
ReplyDeleteSo that's where it all began, eh? And now you are well on your way to making the dream explode! How cool is that?!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Thank you so much for sharing, even if you did make the rest of us feel inadequate. (Just kidding!)
ReplyDeleteIt is amusing to read things I wrote so long ago. This was a fun story on a fun blog.
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Cheers,
xoRobyn
I love this post, and I want to see the story for myself. You need to read this post (and the story itself) to the boys!
ReplyDeleteI was big on ghost stories, too. I won a contest with a story called "The Ghost of the Mary Ellen." That was about a haunted boat, where the ghost was really a stowaway.
ReplyDeleteI'll bet it had a lot of adjectives, too. And adverbs. :D
Great story--and great teacher, for helping you edit it into print! Yes, those adjectives can be quite dazzling sometimes. Nice to meet you via the fest.
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful affirmation of a talent in development at such an early age! Good for you. Thank you for sharing your ORIGIN today! :)
ReplyDeleteHmm...I wrote my first real short story in 4th grade too. Except it wasn't published.
ReplyDeleteYou're a step ahead of me. :p
Seeing your name in print certainly is magic, isn't it? Roland
ReplyDeleteOh, I love that final sentence! I'm so glad you hear you still have the magazine. Very cool.
ReplyDeleteGreat to meet you on this blogfest.I love how you already knew the value of revision and editing at such a young age :)
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lol you have an odd sense of what is romantic!!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed with the big words. I was in university by the time I used them. :P
I still have a copy of my first 'serious' story from 9th grade as well as all my teacher's red-pen comments. I treasure them still :)
ReplyDelete'A Story'.
ReplyDeleteMichael, that is beautiful! You're adjectives are wonderfully brilliant for a nine year old! Write on!
It's good to finally get round to your spot! Hope to see more of you!
what a voice
ReplyDeleteI too am keen on your adjectives. And the fact that, to a 9-year-old boy, a house can be both smelly and romantic at the same time! Great last sentence.
ReplyDeleteWow! nice thank you freind for sharing your story.
ReplyDeleteI love how your teacher was able to keep you at it until your work passed muster. Next to learning how to write, learning how to take and use critiques must be the most valuable lesson a writer can learn.
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