Sunday, June 27, 2010

Microfiction Monday: Sales (sic) on the High Seas

Welcome to Microfiction Monday, at Stony River: a writing life, where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.

[Hate counting letters and spaces? Try Design 215's character counter, which will count for you as you type. Microsoft Word will count for you too, of course, as part of its word count feature under the 'Review' tab.] Here's this week's picture, and my story to go with it.




In all her years as a Wonderbra sales rep, Zola'd never had such feisty customers. But how could she tell them they didn't need her product? (134 characters)


I'll be away from computers the next couple of MMs. Will miss you all, but will be back in mid-July. Happy trails, everyone, and thanks for commenting.

21 comments:

  1. Great one for the day, Michael! Those Wonderbra Reps have a tough job!! Will miss you, too!! Hope you have a great trip! Enjoy!

    Sylvia

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  2. Michael, this was good. Maybe Zola should extend her line to include Training Bras. Will await your return in Mid July, You have a grand trip to where ever you are traveling.

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  3. Oh my..but they do!
    you're funny

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  4. Zola, here's your chance! Sounds like it's time to start a clamshell line ROFL

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  5. Hilarious! My husband is a harsh critic and he said this was VERY good. I'm with Susan. I think clamshells would be sell well.

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  6. Love that wonderbra. I am still laughing at your take.
    Have a great time away. ill miss you Michael.

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  7. ROFLMAO!! Zola the wonderbra rep...to funny. Uh maybe your in basic training? LOL Have a great week ahead :)

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  8. O what a spin! Zola - Mistress of Push Ups! Love it!

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  9. Nice to see that 'small-breasted' women have a chance at immortality! Great take on this week's entry.

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  10. Hilarious! Wonderbras - who needs them?

    Have a great week.

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  11. Yes but think about the fishnet stockings opportunities...I went for another kind of sensory feast.140 Story

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  12. Oh that's great. Maybe they want the matching panties too! (-:

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  13. Just tell them that going bra-less is out of fashion.

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  14. Those sales reps have to work so hard for their commission ;-)

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  15. Now, that's a unique take on the picture!

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  16. Ha! The joys of being in sales. :)

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  17. Nice one! Made me laugh. Thanks for that.

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  18. I read this last week but failed to comment. Very clever.

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