tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post5635068539646800031..comments2023-07-19T06:51:17.843-07:00Comments on The Year of Writing Dangerously: Microfiction Monday: Lost at Sea?Michael G-Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-4213037617013581222010-10-01T17:43:08.762-07:002010-10-01T17:43:08.762-07:00Aw, Helen -- hang in there and keep hoping!Aw, Helen -- hang in there and keep hoping!Susan at Stony Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10385202649291774852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-59810945453650790732010-09-29T03:49:22.975-07:002010-09-29T03:49:22.975-07:00Very nice. Missing someone is more than just their...Very nice. Missing someone is more than just their absence.<br /><br />Dave<br /><a href="http://davewrotethis.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Dave Wrote This</a>Davehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08131223022620329561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-22150091054900628472010-09-28T15:42:25.728-07:002010-09-28T15:42:25.728-07:00I love the phrase about the heart fighting between...I love the phrase about the heart fighting between fear and hope. Well done.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-50849160560156081502010-09-27T20:00:48.782-07:002010-09-27T20:00:48.782-07:00Great comments, all. Thanks!
Dawn, I'm a nove...Great comments, all. Thanks!<br /><br />Dawn, I'm a novelist myself, but am finding microfiction to be a blast. The search for the right word is paramount in such a short space. (And the MM community is absolutely brilliant, also!)Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-23614769896380918042010-09-27T17:50:33.199-07:002010-09-27T17:50:33.199-07:00Man--I would love to write more micro fiction. i f...Man--I would love to write more micro fiction. i find it much harder to write short.<br />hang in there Hal!Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02896381441228343533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-35327019205374232062010-09-27T17:44:45.721-07:002010-09-27T17:44:45.721-07:00Oh no--I can only hope that Hal's ship finally...Oh no--I can only hope that Hal's ship finally does appear on the horizon...Fingers crossed.<br />Have a great week. Cheers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-81313725853921585602010-09-27T17:39:36.547-07:002010-09-27T17:39:36.547-07:00Thanks, Greyscale. It's the first time I'v...Thanks, Greyscale. It's the first time I've been called clever today. Warms the cockles of me heart, it does.Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-7360545400810787992010-09-27T14:42:41.608-07:002010-09-27T14:42:41.608-07:00You and Quilly are very clever! You are the only 2...You and Quilly are very clever! You are the only 2 who noted that there was something else beyond the syrupy micro "Still". The clues are "locked" and "a still"...something frozen in time...like a still from a movie...There's the sadness...She dreams of a moment that progresses nowhere...Something happened on the honeymoon!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-45658752622252297542010-09-27T13:20:42.138-07:002010-09-27T13:20:42.138-07:00It does pull on the heart strings. Well done.It does pull on the heart strings. Well done.septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-4405250820852031602010-09-27T13:20:32.356-07:002010-09-27T13:20:32.356-07:00Ever the fear, ever the hope My 140 Hope your week...Ever the fear, ever the hope My <a href="http://randomtwitterstories.blogspot.com/2010/09/microfiction-monday-50.html" rel="nofollow">140</a> Hope your week goes wellJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-45008595034869977812010-09-27T12:08:14.366-07:002010-09-27T12:08:14.366-07:00Oh, this is heartbreaking! Great microfiction!Oh, this is heartbreaking! Great microfiction!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-12067579759087582132010-09-27T09:21:59.465-07:002010-09-27T09:21:59.465-07:00OOh very romantic and evocative. :O)OOh very romantic and evocative. :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-33036576507103398672010-09-27T09:05:09.475-07:002010-09-27T09:05:09.475-07:00Thanks to all of the above for your kind comments....Thanks to all of the above for your kind comments. Sylvia K and Shakira: nice to see you both again. I look forward to visitng everyone's MMs during the day. [But first I have to do some work :( ]Michael G-Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07947421844294471304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-33557830352412917972010-09-27T07:44:38.922-07:002010-09-27T07:44:38.922-07:00a very critical stage. hope Helen overcomes it :)
...a very critical stage. hope Helen overcomes it :)<br />well pennedPriyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-1137624250725018952010-09-27T06:45:43.962-07:002010-09-27T06:45:43.962-07:00Poor Helen..HOPE is so crucial in all our lives.
W...Poor Helen..HOPE is so crucial in all our lives.<br />Well done!<br /><br />Mine is <a href="http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/09/microfiction-monday-new-spectacles.html" rel="nofollow">up</a><br /><br />Have you a Blessed Week!<br />hugs<br />shakiraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10264352891639027269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-72775182044997636462010-09-27T06:22:53.156-07:002010-09-27T06:22:53.156-07:00Your description of the emotions battling within h...Your description of the emotions battling within her was fantastic in so few words. This was very well written.Pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587300140099806425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-65907789492930181602010-09-27T04:01:15.072-07:002010-09-27T04:01:15.072-07:00Hope and fear are such discordant tensions - a hig...Hope and fear are such discordant tensions - a high and a low jostling for control! Lovely micro!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-36555220433929768652010-09-27T03:59:16.143-07:002010-09-27T03:59:16.143-07:00Always go for the hope, right? Well done!Always go for the hope, right? Well done!SouthLakesMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08822510653198676631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-37196015378307251202010-09-27T03:09:12.728-07:002010-09-27T03:09:12.728-07:00Wow - that's an emotional punch for so few cha...Wow - that's an emotional punch for so few characters!MorningAJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04719744167307369768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-80142683101574002362010-09-27T01:43:03.530-07:002010-09-27T01:43:03.530-07:00Ooh, I hope he's okay, very good one.Ooh, I hope he's okay, very good one.Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-52644465609424892382010-09-27T01:33:40.366-07:002010-09-27T01:33:40.366-07:00A nicely written little story, I liked it very muc...A nicely written little story, I liked it very much.Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/microfiction-monday-50.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-14281951567681746032010-09-27T00:40:15.602-07:002010-09-27T00:40:15.602-07:00An anguished time. Excellently done.An anguished time. Excellently done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-89419855876323563042010-09-27T00:03:09.658-07:002010-09-27T00:03:09.658-07:00This must happen so often throughout the world. Ve...This must happen so often throughout the world. Very sad. A clever MM.<br /><br />Have a great week xEllie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-92051050377734061932010-09-26T22:26:55.277-07:002010-09-26T22:26:55.277-07:00Excellent story! My stomach almost bottomed out w...Excellent story! My stomach almost bottomed out when I read this. I hope Hal made it home safely.quillyhttp://quilldancer.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4002241101280362870.post-72849129764172549382010-09-26T21:06:32.989-07:002010-09-26T21:06:32.989-07:00Terrific one, Michael, as always! Does sound like ...Terrific one, Michael, as always! Does sound like a widow's walk to me! Have a great week!<br /><br />SylviaSylvia Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484577678585907669noreply@blogger.com